I absolutely loved this, blu!

blue you always amaze me….not just how you write but who you are you really are awesome!!

Nice little poem with a good message. I was kind of struck by the dissonance between ’can’t stop’ and that the narrator doesn’t want to, since ’can’t’ usually connotes a desire to do something. Maybe I’m over thinking. Not a critique, by the way, just a rambling thought process.