You start with the sort of emotions that one might expect from a pregnant woman, and end with such a note of foreboding. Very powerful mood switch.
You start with the sort of emotions that one might expect from a pregnant woman, and end with such a note of foreboding.
Very powerful mood switch.
yeah, the mood switch is fine, but the beginning states that she doesn’t know the sex of the child, then this Arthur enters her visions. That is a little contradictory, however it could be chalked up to the Gift. And what is this Gift anyway?
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