awe. i like the flow and everything to this! thanks for entering!

whoa! =/
This is great (sad, but great)!

sad but well executed, did your girlfriend dump you?
should have brought to see a better movie. no just teasin ya, she didnt really did she or that would be mean.

ahaha.
No she didn’t we’ve been together happily for four months (which is actually quite a while when you are a teen)

Sorry to impose, but that’s adorable! awwww, and four months can feel like forever! lol

this is true…..
this is true…..

I also dug the rhythm of the poem.