in line six it needed an a before group hey this is awesome i liked it but isnt that a missuse of superpowers having to correct drunk bus drivers. i mean shouldn’t he be saving me from walking home from the pub pissed? good story though just messin wit ya but next time i am too drunk to walk home from the bar i am going to call for superman.
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