Yes! Oh man, five pencils just for the pure awesomeness of a Guide reference!
That aside, I love Tessa. She’s very accepting of this whole matter. The whole my best friend’s an alien thing seems to be going over very well with her. And Perry seems very…enthusiastic. :)
One should never be caught off-planet without your towel.
“Look, would it save you two a lot of trouble if I just went back to passing out?” Laugh-out-loud moment.
I guess it’s a limitation of the ficly format, but I’m finding the action a little too quick. I’d like some more character development before we hurtle around the galaxy in a burst of action scenes, but that’s just me.
But anyway, I was commenting on this piece individually: excellent stuff. Makes my own efforts look somewhat pale. I’ll have to up my game. ;)
You make a good point about the format, but I think we can also work in character development while, as you say, “we hurtle around the galaxy.”
Also, after all’s said and done, if there’s more character development to be had, there’s nothing that doesn’t say we can’t do a sort of “extended edition” in another format.
I’m glad you liked that line, I’m particularly proud of it, truth be told.
Alright, have we established a sequeling order, or are we still on a first-come-first-claim basis?
@Orange- Methinks there was a minor one already; in “Tessa’s Reaction” Connie whacked Perry in the back of the head “with a rolled up towel.” Or something like that. And yeah, I think you’re right: random would make it more interesting.
As a matter of fact, for whatever reason, I think a good solid “Don’t Panic” reference is shortly forthcoming.
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