This is paraphrased from part of a novel I never got around to finishing. I attempted to make it more awesome, but to be honest that’s kind of where it was going anyway.
Impaling yourself further to close in on your enemy? Classic move, my friend, and always impressive. I wonder at the lack of emotion over the death of Nissa, and I hope you’ll prequel and/or sequel this.
I’ve only just realised that I have actually removed all trace of emotion from the story, which wasn’t intentional. 1024 characters wasn’t enough to get the fight and the reason for it in. Fail :(
Good point. I tend to like to keep my stories as single units, but this is a good case for writing a prequel. Thanks, would never have occurred to me :)
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