Very nice. Love the descriptions. You paint a vivid, if surreal, picture :)

A wildly different approach to epic than most other entries… refreshing

Ah, a challenge entry. Lovely descriptions, but I found myself a bit lost in them, hard to get bearings on what a lot of it meant.

Very cool descriptions. With the space limits imposed by Ficly, sometimes details can overpower the story. To me, the details are the story.

Oh, and you get bonus points from me because the male character’s name is my son’s middle name. LOL.

Thanks for the comments, all. :)

THX0477, anything that could be done to make it clearer? As far as the meaning goes, it’s just about a man asking a woman an epic question in an epic setting.

An epic question, indeed. Personally I’m just stoked that there’s a chick covered in fire.

This is gorgeous – very poetic :) And that first line has the most powerful imagery, it’s truly breathtaking to visualise… Great work!