Now there’s a title. Nice descriptions in the beginning. Some of the wording could be moved around for clarity, though, like in the encounter did not last long line—I had to reread some of the lines like that to make sure the words made sense. Other than that, pretty good.

hmm…interesting…i like it

I also like the beginning description :)

Made me think of the movie dodge ball. XD Grab life by the ball.

“Life grabbed him by the balls.”

Now the question is: Did life squeeze, twist, or yank? O_o

great question phoenix!

Busted, mini mansion man!

uh-oh!