Nice shape poem. Not generally a fan of those as they don’t translate well to being spoken, but I think this one captures the feel of the glider, too. Needs a bit more ‘playing’ with the words – onomatopoeia, assonance, or something. Lovely.
Nice shape poem. Not generally a fan of those as they don’t translate well to being spoken, but I think this one captures the feel of the glider, too. Needs a bit more ‘playing’ with the words – onomatopoeia, assonance, or something.
Lovely.
April Raines