I’m not sure why, but I laughed out loud at “Miranda asked, walking her schnauzer.” haha. The last sentence leaves me wanting more. Also, James is my best friend’s name lol, so it’s good all around!
This is the last story I expected someone to sequel, but the continuation works. James is certainly an odd one.
Nice detail about the darkened holes in the blinds.
A small part of me wants to say that Della has already unconsciously touched her hair, so the gesture here is a bit repetitive, but maybe she is a bit vain…
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