Hmm, I sense a story of epic proportions will follow. Something about a person Fate seems to like. I can’t wait to see where this leads.

However, you may want to look at putting it into paragraphs. Sorry. I’m a bother, sometimes. :)

awesome beginning samurai
man you need a cool pic.

If I can manage a way to set my stories into paragraphs w/o sacrificing the minimal word limit I will do so, i recognize the difficulty of reading a big chunk like that so i’ll perhaps shorten a story in an effort to help the flow.

Thanks for the compliments!