a lot of quotes, sayings, and almost cliche’ s wrapped up in this, and it went from I to you at the end.. which makes it personal for the reader, if that’s what you intended. Overall, it’s a hopeful piece for the aspiring writer, a wish. it’s poetic, but just a little too cliche`d for me..

you just need a pic.
really just get a pic.
I wantr to say something like upon second read i see the satire in the overuse of cliched similies, but it isn’t really worth that type of in depth analysis, if somebody isn’t going to be around long. A good sign of that is they wont even take the time to get a pic that screams Stealing Plums.
just get a pic it literally takes ten seconds i change mine almost everyday.