Mmm – beautiful – its one of my favourite ways to spend an evening (although the last few weeks in Edinburgh its been less ‘gentle tug-tug’ than ‘soaring over Arthur’s Seat’ kind of winds).

My only niggle? Can I have a full stop or a colon after But here, the wind was for me please?

You’ve really captured the mood here. Lovely.

But I agree with Match, you need a colon, or a full stop, after the wind was for me.

You have your colon.

Good man. ;-)

this really was a tranquil piece i liked it

Kites are nice freedom symbolism.
I’ll agree with Mighty-Joe, this is tranquil…but foreboding too, you wonder what’s waiting at home…

As it happened, the house was still quiet when I got home, so I crawled into bed next to my wife and fell asleep. Sorry to be boring.

That’s what happened in my universe, anyway. What happens in yours is another matter entirely…