It still doesnt sound cool. but good story.

this is really good!
but I’d mark it as mature, for the last sentence’s bad word :P
otherwise, very very good, i’d like to read a sequel

@sesquipedalian Thanks. I fixed. I intended to check the box but it seems I forgot.

I grabbed the starting line from Startship Troopers btw.

Short, but it gets the job done. Nice!