Great description. You created an excellently intense atmosphere, especially at the end. Why is everyone missing? What’s wrong? I hope someone picks up and answers these questions.

sigh loved this. Loved the image of that moment
inside and out

Good Imagery. XD I should so dub this my story. XD Having a username that could accurately describe it and all.

maybe she was inspired by it!
great job describing this sesation. the whole moment feels distant, surreal; the quiet of the humans when its not really quiet, the storm is noisy, is what makes it feel odd.