lol I wonder if there are peanut butter trucks. I like it, it paints a neat picture :)

I like how the radio ‘leaks’ Sinatra. That’s an awesome visual. :)

Oh, this sounds like the beginning of one of those teen slasher movies, or maybe that’s just me.
Quirky and intense. I like it.

I liked it so much, I gave it a possible sequel.

oh this is nice

Thanks, all. There’s a story behind the first three lines — been dying to use them.

Beautiful. “Painted sunset air” in particular is a fantastically compact and eloquent description.