beautiful….and totally epic! i love it especially the last line… i wondered how you were gonna end it and you just pulled it out…perfect!

unctuous globules

That phrase right there made this epic for me.

Wow, I had to read that three times. Very well done.

This is ace. Not enough iambic pentameter around here if you ask me.

Also, made me hungry.

oh this was awesome, it kicks my stories ass. That is why i never win these challenges someone always has a better story. This was great.

Hey, thanks, I live to make you folks hungry :-)
@MJY: LOL!! I LOVED your onion story, and now I think of it whenever I’m making lasagne (which happens quite often around here). Ficly, it’s life changing, I tell you.