The first line (of which I only changed one word: “at that hotel” originally read as “at the hotel”) was from The City of Dreaming Books by Walter Moers (an excellent book, really, if you’re interested).

interesting…the hair on the back of my neck is standing already!

Creepy… I’ll have to look up the book, too!

(Edit: I think you misspelled suspense in the last paragraph.)

Ah, thanks for catching that Orange… I’ll fix it in a bit…

it sound good