Darn it! I’m getting more gullible by the second! nice work!

You know, every time I read a Ficly story, there’s a corner of my mind that knows a twist is coming and is frantically trying to figure it out – didn’t get it this time, so touche.

God, I am just such a GREAT writer.
haha.
This one is the last story I may ever post,
Ficly is acting up, not letting me post ma stuff.

Stop it! every time I remember, I feel like crying! =(

XD.
I empathize with the child.
Stop this reckless killing of innocent creatures!
Fry ’em instead. :D

due i read this when i talked to you this morning and forget to comment.
well i am now good job.

I was hoping mosquito. Pesty little bugger.

Eh, nicely written and all, but in this case I didn’t like the twist. I think it was just a bit too dramatic for that big of a leap, presuming read this correctly.

I was not expecting that twist. I loved it! I cant belive your not going to post anymore!! Thats just so sad. I actully like reading your stuff! tear
(thanks for entering)

yeah she killed a spider, but her mother was taking her to the candy shop? spoiled and neglected child! with an unnoticed psychosis over spiders! oh the travesty!

<3

lmao Elsha.
She has…..
issues.

this is fantastic

Who is the mutherf876554 MAC
I say muffy is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t believe this took over your story.
I am actually really freakin surprised.

Muffy you had better keep posting!! Or I’ll…I’ll…be sad! :’( But I agree with Distant. Mosquitos are much more terrifying!

yeah,
it’s good. I can post some more,
it’s just that Ficly was acting funny.
Wow, you guys like my stuff that much?!

wow, congrats on being featured, Muffy =)

sorry muffy i didn’t want to bump you down, but congrats on the feature.

There are no innocent creatures. they are all guilty of something.

Good job

bravo! well written my friend.

A Shakespear reference I see! Intentional?

Weather or not it was, great story. :)

Muffy you really are awesome, this is such a good piece.

While I like it… I’m noticing this trend of “I’m doing something dark and dangerous or twisted… Just kidding, this isn’t interesting at all!”

That’s ironic, because your name is Twyst (twist)
just thought I’d point that out….

I see what you did there! It’s like you’re twysting my words!

haha,
I get where you’re coming from, though.
I just thought it’d be fun to write this.
I do not aim to offend.
lol

Hey twist i know you think you were being clever, and before i tell you the punchline please don’t let this hinder our relationshgip in the future. But your little 2 pencil ‘not so whitty comment’ just made
you look like you are just jealous of muffy’s 3 feature in three weeks success.
Maybe you arent bitter because muffy gets two pages of comments a day and you dont even get three comments, but maybe you took this opportunity to lash out at someone for your own short-comings. The punchline is, if you want success like muffy you have to do what muffy does, read rate comment and then write in that order.
P.s. I still love you twist, muffy is just my dog and i have to get his back.

@Twist…that was so funny he twisted your words……….hehehehehhe
Feel dumb?
I feel dumb for you, that shit was funny.

@twist It is sadly ironic that it was that nom de plume that got you into this pickle.
P.S. stop fucking with Muffy he is a really great individual, would you say that about yourself?

@twist….and oh yeah i changed my icon especially for you…..that gun is pointed directly at you.

Lmao.
LOVE you guys

I like how we were having a friendly back and forth and people got oversensitive.

I just try to be a completely honest critic, and to me, this is a place where I feel I SHOULD get honesty. Seems like everyone’s so needy for praise they aren’t willing to be honest about what they’re reading.

I’ll give props to stud for taking my criticism for what it was. Everyone else should probably just chill, it’s not personal.

we were just messing you twist why you so sensitive? no there i go messin wit ya again.hehehehe

Sorry, didn’t mean to get sensitive and freak out by explaining calmly with logic and reason. Remind me to not respond again before I totally lose it and roflstomp everyone rhetoric with rational thought.

HEYHEYHEYYYY
this ficlet just replaced Harry Hood’s piece of monkey turd ""HmmmMmmm"
for the number one spot on the “Popular” list

I think that the twist at the end is a little forced. What is interesting about spiders is that their blood is colorless, not red. So, not much of a “spot”. And in a few species it turns a bit bluish.
Now, having killed a “blue blood” might be an interesting crime.

Muffy you should KILL all spiders. 5 PENCILS PLUS 2 FOR KILLING THEM DANG HIDEOUS PESTS .

Alright, Not You, it’s been 3 days.
I think you can lower the gun…..
haha