Oh my i feel so bad for the alien he didn’t do anything I hope he’ll be able to escape

Great pacing, nice descriptions!

awwww, I feel so bad for the alien. They just threw him out like trash… =(. good story though! =)

I’m thinking of writing a sequel.

go for it!

that one caught me by surprise

Great suprise twist.

Kind of a worrisome last line, and a disconcerting situation. Nice bit of storytelling.

Your writing always has a great flow to it, so I it was odd in lines 6 and 7, it seems like the alien should’ve already been feeling a bit frightened – being handcuffed to the chair for a crime he was oblivious to. It was probably just me though. It’s late (early). I’m tired. It’s a fun story :) Good bedtime story. lol night!

Blossom, the alien has never been interrogated before and he can’t read human facial expressions, so he’s not afraid until he sees the gun. What alien doesn’t know about guns?? but the awesome prequel clears that up too, he was forced to be here, captured at gun point, so he knows about guns. the prequel also restates that the aliens can’t read facial expressions. :)