I love this line: “Brilliant white light invaded the dark.” There’s so much story packed into this small piece! Awesomeness. :)

yay! my first positive comment back AND my first five pencils!

Ooh, brutal and sudden. I like the balance between the pre-accident revelry and the confusion and darkness half of the story.

Good pacing and very good use of words here. Like Ana, I also liked the “light” line. All the different directions this could go into is good also. Thus, I grant my first 5 out of 5.

awesome. Simply awesome

Damn, after I read the challenge description I thought I would write a blindness story, but you beat me to the punch. Bravo.

Nice, Elsh! thumbs up

This was very nice, I like how you inverted going into the light with darkness being death, and coming back to the living being bright. Clever.

fantastic :)
good take on the challenge :D

yeah this is awright

i really like the way you contrasted the being in a wreck as darkness to the aparent voyage of the protaganist through disability into the light.

Fantastic descriptions! This really drew me in!

Whoa. This is intense. :D