I didn’t like this until the canvas image. Personally, I think it would be better if you removed the ‘questioning’ and such and just gave brief fragments of description, building to the canvas imagery: Wandering the world, a million years after its destruction. Frightening. Mystical. The horror of the world crumbling. An always changing world, always developing, getting crushed under the weight of one catastrophe. Empty. No buildings, no sky scrapers, no bright white clouds against a light blue, never ending sky. No. Under all beautiful paintings there started a white canvas. If you draw a sketch, a beautiful sketch, covering the entire page in nothing but wonderful paints, shades of green, brilliant reds and marvelous blues. All washed away with the addition of water. Leaving behind only the very damp beginning. The white of the page, damp and tinted from the colors that had graced it before. A shadow of its former, marvelous, self. That’s all there is now. A shadow.
Scrawler's Secret
Nancy
Vail Indigo