Comments on Haiku Week Haiku #3 by OrangeOreos (LoA)

Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

due nobody is trying to win this huh? this is like the battle of the joke haikus huh?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Lth{IX}

nice
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

Hey, at least it’s not 2, 3, or 5 in the morning, right?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Music-Hearted

Almost midnight? You’re a lightweight. Haha, I jest. Nice job! I hate feeling like I’ll never fall asleep… alone with my thoughts… ANYWAY…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
OrangeOreos (LoA)

haha, I wanted to put in a later time, but couldn’t think of anything two syllables long…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

If you wanted to put in something later, you could tweak the first line a bit to go something like: “Almost (#) AM:” and then have the piece continue from there.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
invisibility_disability

i know how you feel. :)
- Posted over 10 years ago.