Comments on Fire and Ice (antonym challenge) by ElshaHawk (LoA)

THX 0477

Lovely up and down to the whole thing, with just a touch of stalker desperation. And excellent use of a Petrarchian Conceit, which I have likely misspelled but refers to the great analogies there at the beginning at end.
I really liked that progression in the middle paragraph from ‘I have a boyfriend’ to ‘not my type’ to ’don’t talk to me’. It fit perfectly the idea of this gradually more and more aggravated object of his affection.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
sesquipedalian

awesome entry, and the only one that’s not a poem :)
really good!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

I thought about using a poem, but this came to me in story form..
And thanks to THX for the glowing praise! I am quite humbled..
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

good
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Radical Yellow Duck

Girl,

You da Man
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

HAHAHAHA! Rock on!
Thanks Duck!
MJY, just good? ;) okay.
- Posted over 10 years ago.