this is real good i like the vocal quality of the piece you forget your reading by the second sentence, and it reminds you of your old uncle. good job

this is like watching Bob Ross paint.. happy clouds, and let there be a Victorian sorrow, let’s add some gray and yellow, and there is a pond and two swans, just here, two, because one needs a friend. And there’s the couple, walking, just walking, just here.. more happy clouds..

thanks for the amusing trip down memory lane! You’ve crafted a scene worthy of a gallery.

This reminds me of Babcia.

Elsha, now that sounds like Bob Ross.

Ben, I’ve gotta agree with MJY, it definitely has a vocal feel to it, and it ends on a delightfully positive note.