Not bad. Very open ended still. Any more sequels or are you planning on sinking your teeth into something new now?

I like short stories, but 1024 characters is too short lol, maybe I’ll wrap it up in two or more.

Heh, I’m a no-talent hack so 1024 characters is plenty for me. I don’t tend to think much beyond that limit. Or do I?

but what happens next?!

that was a quick turn around.. nice cliffhanger!

Maybe it is just me, but the conversation seems very juvenile. I almost feel like one of them is going to call the other wiener or something.

Have any of these characters matured beyond the age of 14?

No, they have not.