It makes me curious why she has this connection with a ghostly girl from old Pompeii, but as a whole it’s executed pretty well.

that’s what the sequels are for :P

Just creepy enough to catch interest, I like it.

Oooh neat. Like Usagi said, creepy but interesting.

Pompeii fascinated me ever since I saw a National Geographic about it when I was a kid. Creepy!

This is great orik.

good good. very, uh… capturing? I don’t know

Holy moly. That was really creepy…but not at the same time. And the Pompeii thing threw me for a loop. I really really liked this story. ^.

love it.