Loving the attention to detail. Everybody seems to put sound in space for some reason. I’ve always felt that when dealing with destruction in vacuo, leaving silence made it more epic. (Well, silence save for the suit sounds, as you described. I envision my non-Ficly space sci-fi having suit noises and nothing else, except maybe a vibration here and there being conducted through the surface through a suit standing thereon.)

Bravo!

this is so detailed and vivid its like your not even reading it more like listening it really does suck you in.