Ah, I was genuinely relieved that this didn’t have a bitter, twist ending.
awwww. so bright and sweet! and no ifs, ands or buts. I mean its thes or ands :)
yes i was going to mess it up with a dark twist, but I chose not to, because ficly is too full of them right now!
At the end, he should be like….. like a murderer or something!! lol jk, but ’tis a great story. Even if theres no murder……. sigh
i am with muff i was expecting murder. i guess the real twist was that it had no twist. the irony.
Still trying to figure out if I was expecting a nasty accusation at the end. You got me.
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