The thing about emotional pain is that it goes on for a lot longer than any physical pain.

The one comfort is that it does eventually heal, usually when you found a new love.

This was a breakup scene I wrote for a book, but decided it didn’t work for the story. I thought it was pretty good though, thanks for the read through and comments.

yeah it’s a good scene. makes a sappy ficly series! success!

I think this would have been a nice scene to keep, if only because it is so easy to relate to. Because it was written for a novel, I understand the names but otherwise, to me, there would have been more of an impact without the usage of their names.