Great imagery here. A great foreboding hangs over the house and now i’m curious to see what secrets (or skeletons) they house may hide.

My only little grammar suggestion would be altering the first line of the first paragraph. The sentence is a little run-on..

Either adding a “that” before “had been abandoned” or ending the sentence and starting anew, with: “It sat nestled in a grove of gnarled trees”.

Other than that – i loved it.

Loved it, vivid :)

@Alro ahh that’s what I get for too much editing, hehe. I meant to do that. Fixed now.

@ern – thanks honey :)

Very nice imagery, the open ending leaves so many possibilties. Great work!

ooooh, nice. Mysterious houses always make good foundations for a decent story.