Hmm, has the appearance of depth and suggests a lot, but I think it wound with just not quite enough on which to hold on to. Did that make sense? You hint at a lot, and there are a lot of possibilities, which is all great, but for me the ratio of questions to answers was just a bit too high to make for an enjoyable read.

Nicely executed all the same, and the above is pure opinion/subjective/‘to be taken with grains of salt’.

Oooh, I’m actually quite interested. 9/10 of what I write usually ends up vague and such. I really thought this was a lot more clear cut.

Of course, as the author, it’s a lot easier for me to say that everything makes sense and the possibilities are narrowed down to one solution.

So if you will! Care to add more suggestions? Maybe at your own take on this? All would be appreciated. :]