Comments on Ocean by The Red Death

Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

Hey welcome back deathsyckle hey you shouldnt write such sweet things about me people will start to wonder. hehehehe
just teasing this was a very moving piece, we missed you did you have a nice vacation?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Red Death

awww yes my vacation was very good :)
i missed my ficlybuds
- Posted over 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

uhmlove<3
- Posted over 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

uhmlove<3
- Posted over 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Took me a bit to get the water/wave/erosion theme, but I’m a bit thick today. A few lines in the middle seemed a bit trite/overused, but I really liked the line ‘a seasonal wonder, a temporal treat’.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Jae

Captures a distinct feeling, one that I don’t think I can reiterate in a comment. Call me perverted, but I see a lot of innuendo here.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 2 out of 5
The Red Death

thank you
- Posted almost 9 years ago.