WOW. Really good choice of words, first Five Pencil I’ve given, I will read more tomorrow and I’m sure many more Five Pencils will come your way!

Yeah, I thought it was going to a bug perspective somewhere in that second paragraph. Very fun, though formically tragic, little piece of writing.

hehe cute little story. Think maybe you overdid it just a trifle with the description towering and mighty—could probably have just used one of them not both and still have the same effect.

Nice though.

S.J.