this was fast, really? training in a day? wow.. BUT I understand that you wouldn’t know what they do, I wouldn’t either, so how could you write it? :)
so he is going to be kidnapped, and can now safely wield a gun and fight.
I still dont’ know what the dad knows, what this will accomplish.. lol.

lol I was thinking collaboration , I liked the way you handled the hostages pov and I took Richards.

oh yes, definitely. i can take the family POV, if you want to focus on Richard. :) let’s make a villain to unite our pieces..

The men that will soon capture Richard.