Lovely, heartbreaking, and very topical. Nice job tying all those sorts of things together. I really thought he was going to burn to death there for most of it.
she was right that he should have mailed it? how ominous that he didn’t write a return address! he is homeless! or will be.. very sentimental piece, dramatic, climactic, yet satisfying.
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ElshaHawk (LoA)