I would recommend putting Nineteen Months Later in bold.
Also, the first story took place in first person!!!! lol
But the dialog is perfect, a great sequel, indeed.
Way to stick to the G code.

it is in bold hehehehe

I liked the details, like the missing loot (or whatever) and the injured leg rehab in prison. The chicken man felt a bit too random, and the dialect felt over-the-top in my opinion.

actually there is a type of grimy new orleans accent that is even more foreign than that and chicken man was my cell mate in orleans parish prison. he said they called him that because there were only two guys named chicken man and he was both of them. whatever that meant.

lol! i love the comeback!