these exotic Bed and Breakfasts’ and their exotic fauna! I was not liking the “eyes adjust” then “Blurry” and was going to ask you to fix it, but I re-read it, and it’s okay. :) The use of ‘venomous’ is foreshadowing, nice!
Why are ppl so afraid of spiders? I’m not. :) Don’t answer that.

Ay, you made my skin crawl a bit! Not exactly what I was expecting, but still bizzare, and still quite good.

I may just be able to think of something for this…

HA. He explains it so calmly. I was confused with the order of your adjectives “velvet venomous”, I thought it should be reversed; but as I read I realized that it fits the writing style perfectly and reminds me of the style in The Raw Shark Texts (epic book)

This reminds me of the movie, “The Craft”.

Other than that, your sentences shift from being really simply to really complex (complex in the sense of choice words).

I have to agree with the above. The words and thoughts come out so calmly which contrasts with what’s actually happening. Somehow, it all works though.

OOH. I hate spiders. My brother kept tarantulas in a shoe box and he would always put the box under my bed cause he knew they would be safe from mum. Til I told her.he,he.

That was horrid, absolutely horrid. Nice job with the confused/poor perception and whammo switch to chilling reality.