Well worth the wait, mon amigo. And on the day when I happen to get the Ultimate Guide @ the bookshop, too… coincidence?

ponders

I just might have an idea… but it’ll have to wait, you know as well as I how well my brain functions after 9:70…

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9:70 isn’t a real time…..

Precisely, Muffin. I typed it by mistake once whilst saying my brain doesn’t properly function past nine-thirty. Thus proving my point perfectly.

Hey I sequeled.
I’ve never sequeled anything before.

Well, there’s a first time for everything! Now I’m pumped to see what you did..

nic

yall are just so whimsical with this series it seems like fun to write.

Typo: engorged? Very funny, but probably not quite what you were aiming for.

I’m sorry to say that this story is losing me a little. Lots of stuff is happening, but the characters aren’t really interacting with each other. Your audience (well, this bit of it) calls for some character development.

I love the idea that the Guide is real and that Douglas Adams was writing his story based upon a real Book.

Deathalicious: if you’re going to give a story 2 out of 5, at least give a better than three-character explanation as to why…

Oh man, that’s a stupid typo, haha. Just goes to show what can happen when you don’t know your vocabulary. Changed it to something a bit more sensible…

And thanks for the critique. I appreciate it, and I’ll try to work on that. :D