I feel stupid. I didn’t get it the first time through. I think I’m working too hard. Once you understand this, it’s a decent setup to a potentially interesting story.

Bizarre, and it is a bit hard to follow, but I think that’s an acceptable cost to your blasse way of talking about the situation which I felt reflected your character’s attitude. Really neat story idea.

I’m actually not too proud of this one.

The dream that inspired it was much more interesting.

I hate the ending. I hate cliche garbage and I know I phoned it in at the end but it’s hard to stuff things into 1024 that need more space.

I didn’t get cliché from it. I actually rather liked it. I would like to see more of this.

(For some reason, a movie I’ve never seen Synecdoche, New York comes to mind.)

@AR: Thanks. Synecdoche, NY is fairly brilliant. Alot of philosophy layered over psychology there.