Wow, totally lost me there. I mean, I think I get the gist, but there is a lot there. Aside from the tech/magic aspects (the bird from the previous installment turned into a woman?), I think the main thing adding to the confusion is that most of the dialogue is unassigned.

Point taken. Just done a quick edit to try and clarify a little, but character restriction leaves some dialogue unassigned, though hopefully not overly-confusingly so…

Will be keen to hear others opinions,
MH

I think you just havent weeved enough of the strings together. This has the making of a good series.

Yeah, this one’s good I was tricked into thinking Swift was an aeroplane or something! (Even though the title is “One Hell of a Bird”!)
I’ll read more tomorrow, it’s getting quite late and I’ll rate them too!