This was very interesting, and had a somewhat scary end. What will it come to, reminds me of the opposite of that old 70’s sci fi movie soyant green, with a combo of the extermination of humans in Terminator 4: Salvation. Anyway keep up the good work, definately rated a five.

Yeah, Soylent Green was definitely an influence there. What I didn’t really show was that the various scientists thought that it was simply the degeneration of a demographics trend; that’s actually fairly important to the whole “guise of what’s happening” that I try to create.

And when I say alien, I don’t particular mean “FROM OUTRAR SPACE”. I just mean strange. Odd. Unseen. One is left to think of what exactly happens to the humans in there.

They get plugged into the Matrix, man! I liked this, quite a bit. I got exactly the impression you were aiming for, so great work!