Pretty much caught between where you should be and where you are. I like this story. It makes ya think. I like that.

Ooh, chilling. Excellent job continuing the tone, feel, and the contemplation/action mix…heavy on the contemplation. Thanks for the sequel.

Um….
…He just killed the preacher, didn’t he?

Though I did just realize the character could theoretically be female. Except for MAYBE the “first boob” comment…

And that the tone seems masculine, but female hit-persons usually speak in a masculine fashion anyway, unless they’re the sexy kind.

wow this is really chilling you really moved this piece along.

yeah I agree that you’ve carried the tone perfectly! And it seems the wolf is branching out.. killing other "peter"s..