Comments on Too good to be true by Biscotti

Mostly Harmless

Oh this is good!! Made me chuckle, particularly your use of the word ‘snogging’, gives it a kind of teenage awkwardness… :) MH
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Biscotti

Hah, thanks. I like your picture. Even though I never got to finish that book…but oh well. Nice picture!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Hot_Dog_Stories (LoA)

Yours is nice too Biscotti. That zombie is very hansome. :) Nice Story by the way.
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Biscotti

“Hansome”? Do you mean handsome?
- Posted about 10 years ago.
Ruby Slippers

Great first line! I feel bad for the guy though. Even in his own dream, he’s still awkward.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Laggel

That would be full one of my dreams :P True Story.
- Posted about 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Sara King

Awesome! Very well-written, and the ending made me laugh.
- Posted about 7 years ago.
- 5 out of 5