this so good it isnt funny this is really brilliant. i mean really brilliant. This is the fate of many a trubador.
I wish i had more pencils

Profound.
And, of course, poetic.

You certainly have a way with words Stovo.. not sure if amniocentesis is in the right context though.

It all just works… the meter, the visuals, the whole thing. It just coalesces, it all just works.

Whoa.
I love it.
Like seriously, this blows anything I’ve ever written out of the water.

very nice.

great work! The husband chose to aid his wife, huh? I guess she really loved him and he realized that..

Crazy man! When I read the title, I thought it was going to be something about Pinocchio taking his revenge on Geppetto or somethin’. :D

Tragic and a really fun read. Nice voice to it, even if I got a little lost in places.