Nice stream of consciousness.

Yeah i have to echo AR

I do like the switch in perspective, finally to a character we can not entirely despise. Some of your sentences wound up a bit long and therefore hard to follow.

Thank you all. The one thing I think I failed at was I tried to make it seem a tiny bit chaotic, I tried to emphasize Peon’s mind racing hence the run on sentences. Unfortunately I don’t think I captured this as well as I had hoped.

maybe a space between thoughts would have made it run smoother, but all very valid points you have made!