i didnt see how the last line kept to the blank verse themehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOlznuyPOeM
That line just doesnt do it for me…
hehehehe

DUDE I HAVE LOVED THIS SONG FOREVER!!

But you kinda cheated….

Only credit I take is getting the word out on Johnathan Coulton.

a certain game comes to mind.. with a mall, and zombies..Every time he repeats himself, i picture him hitting the glass mall doors full force.

Yeah,
Jonathan Coulton kicks ass.
his song at the end of Portal= awesome.

I’m at work, so I can’t follow the link. So, this is a song by someone else that you’ve copied the lyrics to? It’s funny, I mean creating a rather intellectual free verse poem from the perspective of a brain-eating zombie.

i was thinking more along the lines of dawn of the dead, i believe thats the movie where they trap themselves in a mall for safety.