I loved where this was going, but it just didn’t seem to get there… The first paragraph in particular was a fine piece of storytelling, but the last paragraph didn’t bring it all to a natural conclusion. Still, intriguing and original, MH

I do agree that it knid of lacks a punch line but the feel was heavenly. and it just rolled along like a dream minus one for no awesome resolution four pencils

oh yeah welcome to ficly, my name is Mighty-Joe MJ for short if you have any questions feel free to note me, i note back.

oh yeah, sequel! this lovesick puppy needs to meet his actress!