so Marty found his friends, but what adventures await in… Japan?

oh this is good he should probably quit drinking though.

okay, I’m not satisfied with this quick ending, I’ve decided on another direction, if anybody likes this version I’ll keep it up, but I’m gonna go back and create a new third chapter, maybe even deliver on some of the action I set up at the end of the second.

you can just edit this one and do it over

okay, disregard all of my previous, comments for this story ;)

Very nice! I like new version way better!

thanks m@

a bar fight! get some answers! the clipped sentences of action worked for you here.

Thanks, ElshaHawk.

hey anyone named max has an advantage in my book! ;)