Nice continuation, and a nice job shifting from more internal thinking to more of the action going on. The last lines got a bit rushed, but that’s what the character limit does, isn’t it?

of course fresh meat would cause them to stop bothering the trapped guy! Go Zed, saving the girl! so now what, she’s comes in the portapotty with him?? I don’t think he thought this through..

A is for AMAZING STORY… I love how his pride won’t let him believe something like real zombies and undead are out and about.

@THX 0477: Yeah, it’s surprising how quickly you run up to the 1024 limit!

@ElshaHawk: Heh, I thought about going there actually… Could be quite funny. But I like where THX’s sequel is going too.

@Krullltar Thank you very much!

God you have me on this one! I want to read on… love the gate opening behind her, but am getting anxious just thinking about what’s next. Great imagery, very clear in my head.